Audience Feedback

Audience Feedback

·        Confusion as to how the girl falls in love.

·        Character development needs to be a bit clearer.

·        Soundtrack fits well with the film

·        It was made clear that the guy likes the girl

·        Film may have been too short for any of the characters to develop

·        Use of a classroom was done well and effectively

·        Shot of classroom was good as it helped to establish the setting

·        Use of dream sequence was well done and helped to portray the girl as more of a “dream” girl

·        Creative use of the tracks and tracking shots throughout the film

·        Bee sequence was an example of a good use of editing techniques

·        Titles were well mad and helped set the tone for the film as it told the audience the film would be in somewhat of a school setting

 

General Audience Ratings + Feedback:

 

·        The bee sequence was a bit slow but overall enjoyed the film (8/10)

·        The film definitely fits the genre of a ROMCOM and story was told well in most areas (7/10)

·        There were a few continuity errors however they  may have been unfixable but overall I think the narrative was well told through the film (9/10)

·        Liked how creative the shots were and felt that they added to the story (7/10)

·        The story was written well and the film was edited quite well all round (8/10)

·        Liked the film but some parts of it weren’t clear (7/10)

·        Good idea and was executed well in the film, the characters general personas were clear, eg. Clumsy friend, dream girl.  (7/10)